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| ossining 2005-06-10 ch 1,   | Cool poem. I like how you use casual language like ain't and saying what you seen. That makes it more real. |
| In Search of Sunrise 2005-05-29 ch 1, | the emotions...i can feel that, it is a pretty good angsty poem haha keep it up! ~DW |