Nice...it has a steady beat I can see as I read this.

And to answer your question in Man In The Water: I think it would be more like a rock opera.

This would make an awesome metal song, and if me and my friends eery find a male vocalist, is itok if we try to play it?

Unfortunately I cannot hear this song being sung, but I can imagine it would be good.

This is awesome, I like it, not much else to say, so good job