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| Lady Arabella the Wise 2005-06-08 ch 2,   | Hey, another interesting story I can tell. Sorry I haven't had time to review it eariler but I can tell this one will be as good as the others. I hope you come out with the Revealing Mina chapter 7 soon. (My running favorite). Keep up the awsome work. |
| Raye Dragonmage 2005-06-07 ch 2, | *mourns* Your chapters are too short... |
| Raye Dragonmage 2005-06-07 ch 1, | O.O This is gonna be good... |
| satinsmoke 2005-06-03 ch 3, | haha...harry sounds...scary. i hope i never have to go through a date like that :P. trey is a nice name. have her get together with him, please? or a different guy. NOT STEPHEN! i dunno...just don't like stephen... teehee. i'm so irrational... anyway, great story :). update soon! |
| satinsmoke 2005-06-03 ch 2, | hm...the guy sounds nice. but we'll see in the next chapter :) i suppose she might end up getting together with stephen and...i dk. for some reason i dont like that idea too much. could you not have that happen? reading on now... |
| satinsmoke 2005-06-03 ch 1, | LOL, shes CEO of an ice cream place? man, i'd LOVE that job! *glares enviously* anyway, nice list. i'd go for pretty much the same thing...except it struck me that she didn't put "good looking" or anything along those lines on her list. not to be shallow or anything...but...doesnt that matter at least somewhat? |
| lostinmydreams 2005-05-31 ch 2, | i still love it a lot your doing good even though the chapters are kinda small but thats ok since your just starting out. |
| Lexie-R 2005-05-31 ch 2, | I really like where this story is going! I love your other work and I can't wait to see where you plan to take this one!! |
| moon-girl1 2005-05-30 ch 2, | Great chapter! You alerady introduced us to two guys so we don't know right away who she's going to end up with. I love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Smittened By Marauders 2005-05-30 ch 2, | *giggles* OMG That's a good one |
| Jessica Renee 2005-05-30 ch 2, | First off, I'm a little bit confused. 11 PM and she's going to work? I mean, I could see her staying until then if she's such a workaholic, but it's just kinda weird that her secretary and everybody else is still there. I can already tell that I'm going to love this story. Update soon! |
| Jessica Renee 2005-05-30 ch 1, | I liked this. I like Iris and I loved the list she made. I have a list too, haha, but not quite like Iris am I out searching for that EXACT guy. For me, they're more like guildlines. |
| moon-girl1 2005-05-29 ch 1, | Wow!! I really love this :) You have a very good beginning! I like the character of Iris. Even though she is a workaholic (and because of that, there were chances that readers would not like her), she appears quite sympathetic and nice. I can't wait to read more! |
| lostinmydreams 2005-05-29 ch 1, | Aw I like this story already, I hope you continue to write and finish it! |
| Nichole L. Andrews 2005-05-29 ch 1, | This was so great, and the topic is perfect. Maybe its just me, but I think it has a sense of girl power about it. That's awesome! Keep up the great work! |