Wonderful. Your images are great, they convey the anguish of this piece perfectly, and make it very intense. The ending is a good turn, though I'm not sure if i can believe the speaker, it is just too hard to detach, especially in the light of the intense love and pain expressed before ... A wonderful poem, I love it.

I like it. What does Selah mean? It makes it seem like a psalm, while it doesn't really sound like a psalm. I also love how the rain is your lullaby. I love listening to the rain... especially at night lying in bed. Lovely work.

Doggonit. What's wrong? Gee whiz, yes it's a good poem, but you wouldn't write stuff like this if it weren't for real. You have got to talk to me here... I'm here though. *sigh* What a review. Anyway, I love the fact that you used the British form of "Colour." Very nice touch, but you really are saying something sad here, and I only have a mild idea what it is. Good job writing, but uncool for the sadness.

i really like this poem its both very lyricaland deepand i like "selah"at the end that was what david wrote at the end of the psalmsi kinda know what it means and i have no ideaat the same time

heyhey! thats cool, I like how the rain is your lullaby, that's really sweet.byezjellybeanz

That was really good. I can definitely relate to it at the moment. It could almost be a really pretty song.