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| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-06-01 ch 1,   | cool ending, i like this, maybe change "Your loving me" to "your love in me" but thats my only suggestion really, lots of new poems on my site now, x weasel within x |
| darkaura de shadow 2005-05-30 ch 1, | GOD THIS IS SO SAD...I KNOW THE FEELING BUT...AW SORRY THIS IS in bold print...i left the cap lock on.but yet another ryme..im not use to seeing that in your work.good jod,keep writing those feelings down |
| breezy nostrils 2005-05-29 ch 1, | Sad, I've felt this way too, but life goes on and you heal in time. |