You are...amazing. The words in here were so good I had to read it over and over again. Talent was portrayed in all your poems, but this one was overflowing talent.

You are so gifted. I especially appreciate this poem because i recently broke up with my long-term boyfriend and the second verse reminds me of that

Wow, absolutely amazing. Your imagery is perfect, and the whole poem expresses such a depth of passion and sadness at the same time, the speaker's dependency upon the other person in a partly destructive, addictive relationship transpires through quite well. A great poem.

i cannot get over how absolutely great you are. so pretty, honestly, my mind goes blank when i read your work

this is very good!your very talented.:)

Simply amazing, and I can relate to the words.

Thank you for reviewing mine. I'm not sure if I'll continue or not. It was originally meant to be a one-shot, but you never know.

this was SO good! the ending was excellent and i love the story you tell. i feel like i can relate!

“Melt in your bed”… what an amazing line. The thing I loved most about this was the format. I loved the way it just suddenly broke off without warning. Very cool. And I loved the imagery for this. Just beautiful. The ending was perfect. You’re so damn talented! Great work, keep it up! (Second last piece! *sniff* WRITE MORE!)

Slang makes it more real. Nice colours.

Deep. Nothing really else to say. Amazing. You're a really talented writer.

Simply brilliant! Great work!

*lime-girl*

Simply delicious...

N.S

That second stanza was just, wow. Brilliant. Beautifully conveyed, all of it was. Brava.

this is really good!

wow, I can relate to being so addicted to someone and crumbling without them. Great piece.