Very colorful poem-Applies to the emotions.Well written.

I really like this poem. I don't know why but I seem to be drawn to tragedy. I think it is because It very often depicts such strong measures of love. I just have one question. How did the husband die? Not that you have to answer it in the poem, but I was just curious. It says he died, but I don't know how. I think that would be a hard question to answer to a child. I know that it is a question I never would want to have to answer. Keep up the good work. Have you ever thought of trying free verse? It is something I just started recently. You might like it.

im sure that'd be one of the hardest questions to answer your child. good poem

~stlouisrams00

love it! You are real good. I think i may just have to put you on my fav. author list. but then you have a commetment to update alot!