In my opinion this is a high quality story. It had this kind of fairy tail element in it, which I liked.

Hi,
I like this story, it's like a fairy-tale gone slightly wrong. I especially like the ending sentence, because it's in keeping with that theme.
There really isn't much to complain about but you accidentally started a new paragraph when you went into brackets in the instance and I felt that you didn't need to use the brackets the second time with a bit of rephrasing. You also switched from the past tense to the present in the last part of this story and you used 'says' and 'said' a little too frequently. There are a lot of other ways to express the fact that someone is talking.
But apart from those minor things, I really enjoyed reading this.
dangerouslies, a fellow member of Reviewers Kingdom

Very interesting.

I absolutely loved this piece. Amazing story weaved in this poem. the fairy tale of a love for everyone and the misfit of fairies wishes lured me right into it. Probably one of my favorite poems I have read tonight. bravo to you *smile*