Aww, he's born with his father's eyes. It's so sad!

Julia.

Very good

I really like it. The rhyme scheme is pretty good, and I love the first verse. I don't know why, but that verse is my very favorite of the whole poem. I can visualize the poem in my mind, but the visualization for that verse is so touching. It is really good.

I love it! It is so going on my fav. list too! Wonderful! are all your works this good! Let me go find out. Hey, you might like mine. check it out.

-seumat zasgeku aka pxigrl

That is such a sweet poem. It was awesome. I loved it. This is definately going on my favorites. Keep up the great work.

~stlouisrams00