you could just kill your self and be done with it then i would not have to read you flaming me that was just me being pissed at you but it was an good peice of work

Wise and philosophical.

So sweet - I feel like I've read this before. Hm. Oh well. Good job on it, I think it was very beautiful.

Villanelle is my favorite type of poetry . . . and it's so refreshing to see one written well. The only mistake I saw was with "other's"--it should be "others'."

NICE! Lovely!!