Reviews for Temporary Dream - FictionPress.com

Pheobe Meryll 2005-12-08 ch 1,	you gave this peice such a dreamlike quality. i love how you can create all these different atmospheres with your choice of words.
Alone in the Desert 2005-06-12 ch 1,	I like the imagery you use here, especially "transitory Eden". Nothing lasts for long... It's painful, but a certain comfort at the same time.
Ruarc 2005-05-31 ch 1,	Hm. Food for thought. And very eloquently put, as well. But will definetely make one think- are there ever happy endings?
Aimee Raven 2005-05-31 ch 1,	Whoa! First of all, I'm very ** off, because I did not get an alert for this glares daggers at ficpress...Oh Sarah...this is so sad...it's making me cry...every word you use is so magnificent, so full of meaning! The images you conjure are fascinating...you have the best poetry ever, and I forbid you to argue...I particularly love the last two lines "but the tears are so much colder in a fading sanctuary" so sad...sigh :Love, Mia PS. What's the thing/song/poem from your profile?? It's so devastating...you have to tell me where thats from!
Heather Montgomery 2005-05-30 ch 1,	Beautiful poem, darling. Quite sad, really. Don't worry.. just because your happy, doesn't mean it has to end! I love the imagery. And hey.. you didn't rhyme room and outside again.. so that's a plus. hehehe. Love you, my incredibly talented Faerie!
simpleplan13 2005-05-30 ch 1,	beautiful.. love the ending
UniB0b 2005-05-30 ch 1,	I don't know why exactly, but I really like this poem. It touched my heart...