 Edraith 2005-06-07 . chapter 1I like this, you have structured it well and the word choice is good, too. I can easily understand the speaker's train of thought and feelings becuase I have been through similar experiences. I like the development that runs through the poem, from "I know" to "I wonder" to the last stanza, "I pray". That last stanza gives a conciliatory note to the whole poem , a tougch of forgiveness for those who have hurt you, the wish to return blessing for curse. Good poem. |