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| charley 2005-06-02 ch 1,  | uhmm...cool poetry! |
| Scraper 2005-05-31 ch 1,  | A very good poem, really gives you the feeling of a death march |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-30 ch 1, | Full of energy! |
| Pace 2005-05-30 ch 1, | great but there is just one thing you need to edit," But the souls of the brave WAS..." it needs to be were. Sorry I am such a grammar Nazi. good one though. |