Awesome piece! ^_^ Keep writing!

~Anna~

WOW! This song/poem is so strong yet sad but this is really good and don't stop writing and pratice not that you need to, but the more you do the more it helps,I do it alot because I am not the world's best writer,but I try.However you are very good Keep your talent going! Midnight Lynx

This is a lovely poem/song. I love how it changes from other people not seeing to you not seeing. It's very sad. Nice work.