Aw...how very sweet. you make me smile.

Wow! I love it! The rhyming is quite natural--I love it when rhyming is natural. I always say that, whenever there's a poem with natural rhyming. I don't mean to be repetative. *cough*

Anyway, lovely poem, in every respect. Kudos! And cake! Gotta have cake.

*gives cake*

great poem. really simple and touching. one thing, the last line, "-unless there's a me, and a you." the comma feels awkward, so maybe remove it or write, "unless there's a me, unless there's a you" or something.