Whoa... I'm amazed.

Excellent poem, and such an interesting form. Great dive into the heart of a sixteen year old girl. It makes me feel the emotion of wanting to be loved in a different way. Keep it up. You go on my Favorites lists!

wow...i thought it was very good. It sounds like exactly what I'm going through

Very nice. I like this a lot. Flows perfectly and says just the right amount to convey this ageless loss.

I like the story-ish flow to it, very pretty.

Powerful and passionate, I really loved the way that you presented this tale through poetry. Amazing job, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

I can...sort of...relate. I liked this one a lot.