Welcome rain...nice ending. I love the rain, thunderstorms in particular. The feelings you evoked of a stormy day was wonderful. Great piece once again.

Great work! I love the style! Although it's indeed like little snapshots, there's still a nice flow in it. Keep writing :)

Tell me about it! 99-103ish, ugh.

it isw almost like scattered thoughts, i like it. kinda like snapshots telling a story..