|Reviews for Marbles|
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 6/2/05 . chapter 1
truly amazing imagery, it's quite frightening in places, making this poem very effective, i love the lines "This mind / This head" very well written x weasel within x
| Made in U.S.A 5/31/05 . chapter 1
it's very powerfull andjust scary. i like the honesty and keep writing :D
| AntiPleasure 5/31/05 . chapter 1
Ah David, sometimes I just want to ring these fiction gals and duds by the neck. They're not even up to your standard of talent, I must say. Love, pretty soon fictionpress will have a limit of 10... so you'll just have to make a new account LOL I'm kidding, damn you should just tell me to fuck off half of the time.
I have been reading some of your new-ish stuff lately - it's improvement but same ol' ;) haha I love ya. I really do think you can go somewhere with your song writing, so keep at it.
happy belated birthday *muah*
| Slowly Sinking 5/30/05 . chapter 1
Ok, wow, that's scary. You write really powerful poems; it's great.