Damn, here I thought this one was complete...

Anyway, very well written again. If you ever do decide to continue it, please let me know.

I really like your story. Keep going.

I'll be waiting for the upcoming parts.
:)

update soon

aww i really realy like your story!! and its been..over TWO WHOLE YEARS since you last updated! pleasse wrriittee mooree? :) LOVE IT!!

damn! Daniella was right! ur stories r amazing and this is onyl thr first please write more!!

it was good. the last few chapters were better written. you might want to go back and edit the beginning, add more detail as i said before.
update soon!

~Alex
(please take the time to read my story as well. =D)

it's good so far. the first chapter was a bit rushed, though. maybe elongate things, describe her past a little more. i felt you didn't explain her feelings during the whole situation. maybe add something about that.

Update soon

nice story! i hope you continue this story

o ur store's really, really good please go on

Ok. now this is what i like. this is getting better and im starting to understand william a little more. i think you should continue this story its not bad so far. I hope it gets better!Friggin Awesome

well, ive got questions, like why does he want her? No offence but so far and im only on the second chapter, im sorry but to me it seems to have a weak plot...

Well, i have to say this must have been one of your earlier peices because i can tell this isnt as good kiss of death. Its good so far but it seems so...quick. Anyway maybe itll get better in a little bit.

This is really good actually all of your stories are really good.

i just had to read more of your stuff.and its good that it stopped here for now because it is way late and i need to get up early for school.

your stories are amazing and incredible