*sobs*

Y.Y

I am sad.

Update. There is hope for Blue and the others, isn't there?

*gives cookies*

Lurvyness,
~Graevan

Thank u so much! I loved the chapter, only one more left for my b-day lol. I can't wait to see wat happens in the next one. Imma have to come up with a way to get more people reviewing, it's such a good story.

I swear to goodness that I already reviewed...yea, michie's loosing it -.-; I think I criteged on the phone already, so, I guess I'll leave it at that cause I said what I thought about it already. If not, I most likely had a skit-zo frenia moment right thur, but hey! that's life, am I right? ... yea, didn't think so -.-; Anyway, keep up the good work, and I'll tty real soon, ne? Luv ya and God Bless, Michie

That was so incredibly sad. So u really killed off ur own character. Nice. But it was sad, but good. Update soon.

You made me cry...:-(

You should have this published. This story is amazing. I have loved it since the beginning, and it's still incredibly interesting.

Aja's dead? :-(

-- Sage

Oh crap. This chapter scared the ** out of me. What's happening to Aja?

-- Sage

hey aja another great chapterit was a little cunfusing but i thinki understand... i think

GAH! AJA-CHAN! U CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THIS! 0.0 God, I was like on the edge of my seat for this chapter ^-^ Well, done, I like the way you corresponded the different characters current situations to prelude into the next situation. Very clever! Oh my gosh, my mind is like racing after that chapter like ~ Is Aja goin to be ok? Is Jenny in love with Zapp? What kinda name is Zapp anyway? Is Blue gonna some how get to Aja? James gonna break out before Blue? Will they break out at all? How the hell did I manage to pull a stunt like that? Ebone gonna get to see James again? Where's Adam? Why can't I see him? Why do I keep complying to everything he says when he kisses me? I LOVE YOU TOO ADAM! ~ yea, and that's only the begining, let me tell u! Even though this chapter was more on the serious side, I still had a good time reading it, I laughed, and blushed, and got spastic through out the whole thing! Keep it goin, I kno u can get this published someday. Have fun at the beach, and call us soon ok? I'll be prayin 4 u, and God Bless, Love ya! ^-^ ~Michie~

This is a great chapter, i can't wait to see wat happens next. Um...so yea, update soon.

I enjoy your writing style, and like the dialogue in the beginning. :) It was a good hook idea.

I have to tell you that it was a bit unnerving to read about a character with the exact same name as me. I've never had that happen before. Keep it up!

Okay, I finished reading this whole thing about a week ago or something, and I just remembered that I have to review it! That last part about Aja not breathing-wow. Took me by complete surprise! Congrats on the originality of this! Never come across a story like it-maybe a publisher will be interested?

Wow this story rox pls write more it's awesome my sister loves it too!

what will happen next i wonder does aja die?

*starts laughing uncontrollably* MICHE DANCING IN HER UNDERWEAR! HAHAHAHAHA! But anyway, Miche's part was really cute, and the rest was amazing. I can't wait until the next chapter, so i'll do wat i can to get reviews without cheating this time. *cough* I'll do wat i can *cough* Alrighty, not much else to say, already talked to u about it, review 32, just 2 more!

AJA-CHAN! I CAN'T BELIVE U DID THAT TO ME! *walks away fuming!* Nah, just kiddin'! I luved it, even though it was embrassing...^.^; Yeah, just kno next time that u pull a stunt like that, that "I WILL CUT U!" *pulls out a knife and starts running around w/ it while NOT wearing white and black pink frilly underwear, but instead is decked out in ninja clothes* QUWA! Ne, what else is there to say? I kinda commented yesterday on most of the story, ne, demo I'm not sure where exactly ur goin with this demo where ever ur goin it's turning out to be an awsome story ^-^ Please keep writing, and MEESH REVIEWED! ~ So hopefully this is the last review needed for u to update ur story when ur done with the next chapter, ne? ^-^ Luv ya lots, God Bless, and I'll talk 2 ya probablly tonight! Peace ~Meesh~

This is a great story so far, this should be your 30th review, so i expect an update really soon.