It feels nice and nostalgiac, I like it makes me remember of my earlier child hood. Nice composistion and delivery and isn't a romance sob story. Three squirrels up.

Joseph

(BTW so sorry for not reading your stuff sooner, you know not honoring my code of honor you read my stuff I read yours. I also noticed you have a lot of works and there is no possible way I can read them all so if there are any specifics you want me to read please contact me.)

I like this.

*Amber*

beautiful

good, evoked some nice images