WOW! I love this poem. Especially the line "Your own blackness has now bled into my veins," I LOVE that. And I can partially (if not totally) relate to how you feel. Keep up the good work, and thanks for reviewing me!-Mina

Im enjoying this little piece that you wrote. It reminds me alot of myself. Its real..

Nice. I like the way you implied that someone who was now innocent is tainted... That she's transformed now. I especially like the lines "Your own / blackness has now / bled into my veins". Good description there. =)

I like all the words you used, but sometimes I'm no good at figuring out the flow of some poems, and that heppened here. Love the wording though.