 arwen-evenstar89 2005-08-13 . chapter 1i love it! the last few lines are really good... but the whole thing is totally something i could say to Christ and mean. Great job!
*Lauren |
 Needa S 2005-07-27 . chapter 1I agree. Excellent piece. Keep writing for Christ. God Bless ya!
Needa S. |
 Felecia 2005-07-18 . chapter 1This is a lovely poem. I like what it says. Keep up the great work. |
 content with rhyme 2005-07-12 . chapter 1This is a beautiful piece, I love it. Keep writing your praise to Him, it'll bless and inspire others. :o) |
 Caduceus-Vulcan 2005-06-26 . chapter 1Very cool, it reminds me of that song by Tim Hughes called, "Beautiful One". Mabey this should be a song too.
*Mr.Underhill. |
 Aslan Israel 2005-05-31 . chapter 1Wonderful. He's the only One. |