omg this is really, really well-written. I haven't read a story like that in fp for a long long time. You should get this published! But before that, you BETTER GET IT FINISHED. update son! You are such a great writer!

ur back yayayayay. oh please keep writting the "risks worth taking" i love that stroy. yeah this chapter was good i liked it. keep on truckin' yeah pce MJ

This is really good!I feel sorry for Gaenor because everyone isn't taking what he says seriously.I hope people will soon!I like this.

xoxo,♥

this intro was really, really good!and I've finally finished it!onto the next chapter!

xoxo,♥

dumdedum.

dude, you've got me so sucked into this world. it makes me think of lord of the rings, especially when you describe her as "impish" and "pixie like."

very creative names. must've taken forever. are you going to have a language for this too? that'd be really awesome, though also incredibly time consuming. the one name that i didn't like was "finliques." it doesn't roll of the tongue very well. the others seem really natural, as if, "duh, that's a real place." finliques sounds like fin-leeks or fin-li-q's.

otherwise, update! you have gone 2 weeks already! lol, i'm just kidding. i've been going for 2 years (DANG).

HAPPY SIXTEENTH BIRTHDAY!!

wow, doesn't that just sound SCARY?

hehe, well, i thought that i'd surprise you with a review.

anyhow, *waggles eyebrows* do i maybe recognize parts of this? i dig the last line. i also like "twists of fate." also "she used to think it invincible." i like the formatting of this story too, the way you break out certain lines to make them much more poignant and vivid.

It's great so fa! Please update :)

Oh my goodness...I didn't realize how much I missed your amazing writing until I read this new chapter. Seriously, most of the other works I've read recently on this site pale in comparison to almost all of your stories. YOU ARE PHENOMENAL!

ok, yay, now to the story: I am really looking forward to hearing more about this Ken guy. The line about how could he resist Josie made me think "is he gay?", but it could be he's just not her type. I certainly hope he's Evelyn's type, though, because it is always quite tragic when hot guys turn out to be gay.

Also, I think I really like Gaenor's character. I hope he doesn't fade into the background too much. And I think I like Josie's character a lot, even though you haven't talked about her too much. It's always nice to have a flirty girl who everyone hates and is jealous of.

Anyway, UPDATE SOON!

-L-

I really like it, its quite good :)

O_O...you...UPDATED...Wow...

Okay, for my review...Erm...the way Gaenor reacted to how Evelyn said, "I'm so glad we're done with wars" was a little...erm...odd...it just didn't seem natural...err...nevermind...also... I don't really like Evelyn's character...she seems so...happy...too happy, and cheerful...and kinda clueless...I guess...then again, I tend to skim chapters instead of actually reading, so maybe I missed something...XP

Yo. Word up. Looking good. Nice intro. Yeah keep righting.pceM.J.

great beginning! i'm really impressed by your writing..your descriptions are wonderful, you use great vocabulary without being too flowery or anything, and it seems liek a really interesting plot. i love the last line too - good foreshadowing. great job :)

Woah...You've got me hooked!-Update soon!

wow that's kinda depressing. Good writing tho! I didn't read the first version, but I think you should definently continue this version. Oh also you should continue Gilded Hearts, I just couldn't give it my vote cuz I'd already reviewed it. So my votes are: 1. Forgotten Autumn Nights (new version)2. Whisper of War 3. Gilded Hearts.

-L-

P.S. Thanks for reviewing my work!

wow... i luv the description in this! update soon!

estelle