Reviews for Rapunzel: A Reality Check

Clarinet Girl Lyss 2006-06-22 ch 1,	This is cute. I like Barefoot Justice better, personally, but it's cute nonetheless. In the first stanza "they" should be "thy". Otherwise, it's excellent. ~Lyss
servatis-a-pereculum 2006-02-03 ch 1,	gesticulates feverentlyI REMEMBER THIS POEM! 8TH GRADE! OR SOMETHING! I REMEMBER! It still makes me giggle incessantly when I read this...You make me inferior when you write...
E. M. Grinlord 2005-09-04 ch 1,	This poem is certainly worthy of a good chuckle. My only criticism is that the rythm seemed a little clumsy at some points. Otherwise, a good read. Incidentally, have you read my "Rupunzel, Rupunzel!" poem? It runs along the same vein of this one, but it's more of a breif critism on Rupunzel. Good goin'!
Darisha 2005-05-31 ch 1,	LOL! I really like it ^^ Amusing twist
LilacShadow 2005-05-30 ch 1,	lol! XD This was pretty funny. I don't usually read humurous poems often, but this was worth reading!
AngelUpSideDownCake 2005-05-30 ch 1,	Hah! Oh so true and realistic! I love when people make their written works as real as possible! I love how you took such a well-known tale and changed it into something funny and realistic.
Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-05-30 ch 1,	ha thanks for the laugh I needed it. :smiles: cute poem you got there. EB