any chance of getting this story revived?

I liked the previous chapters so far. I think your doing a very good job so far can't wait to see more. I'd like to see a person they meet at an inn that has a that has a dangerous animal as a pet join the group along that would be funny. I also would like a better back story on the lord of shadows he sounds like an interesting story

please update again soon! please! i love this story!

I am LOVING this story. It's engaging, there's lots of action, and it's really fun to see James kick butt all the time. Some suggestions though: don't let James become too all powerful, because then the reader will never feel that he's in danger, and the action scenes won't be as tense or exciting. Also, I don't really get a feel for the world you've created for the characters. What's it like? I read the story expecting a medieval europe type setting, but it seems to be in a modernistic quasi alternate reality with elements of fantasy... Very hard to describe, but it sanctions an explanation, because I was very confused when everone randomly showed up in cars. The story could use a little more description, but apart from that I like it very much. Keep up the good work!

Very good, nice desription, creative storyline, humor, and seriousness. If you want that in a nutshell: I loved it. This could be a story that rivals Tolkien and Donaldson. Keep with it, for you are very talented with the art of writing.

damn cliff-hangers...gr...awesome story though... one word. UPDATE! please?

AWESOME! it's better then your otehr ones XD i can't believe that i said that. oh well. it's an awesome story. if it was a whole book i would buy it in an instant. i LOVE this story!

I don't. . . freaking. . . believe it.

I'm going to sock it to ya' straight. I enjoyed this very much, and it was a very pleasant surprise.

I clicked on this story out off all the others on the list expecting a total dud. I've been having a pretty unlucky night with Fictionpress, actually, and was really starting to get bored (I was almost ready to go to my room and re-read Hamlet, which I find to be singularly interesting reading-- given my low standards, I hope that you now have some measure of understanding as to just how disinteresting I was finding the work on this site to be).

So anyway, I clicked this story and read the first sentence. My immediate thought was, "This sucks. Next!"but for some reason, I read the next sentence. I blinked and BOOM, I'd read the whole first paragraph. After that, it seemed only fair to give your writing more of a chance, so I read on. All throughout the first half of the chapter my thoughts were exactly the same, if in different words at different times: "This is so stupid. I need to stop. . ." but, as you might by now have guessed, I kept going. It was half-way through that I realized something that really made an impression on me: I had a huge, dopey grin plastered across my face that I had not previously been aware of. I realized that your writing is genuinely funny, for all its quirks. It is, therefore, ginuinely interesting.

So anyway, I guess my point is, thanks very much for making my night. This is the best I've read tonight, and though that's not saying much, I still mean it as a weighty compliment.

Nice nice... Wow, James suer has matured in your mind, hasn't he? Who'd a thunk you'd write a story that started off with JAMES MAKING A MISTAKE!! This looks to be fun - the usual Rendal29 goodness. I like Frost. Heh, I like this James so much better now... I'm off to read the new version of the Crystal Thingy.p.s. sorry if it's been a while between you posting and me reviewing - just got outa the hospital this afternoon. This is already making me feel better.