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| Leaving Here 2006-08-10 ch 1,  | abusewow! i really like this!keep writing!~Liz |
| the naked civil servant 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseoh, how orgasmic. you are utterly wonderful & starstudded. i am glad i wore my corset... for i fear my sides have split |
| wishing/dreaming/waiting 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abusehey, this was really well done. it's interesting how you're talking to "love" and sort of mocking everything about the happy endings everyone tries so hard to live. or something... yeah, i'm not too good at interpreting poetry.. but hey, i can try can't i?! well good work, anyway. |
| [e] 2005-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuse-loves. -loves A LOT. (but i thought we screwed disney oevr first.) |
| citrus scented 2005-06-15 ch 1, | abusedivinely cynical. love some of the all too thoughtprovoking lines in this, some sadly relatable. some wonderful metaphors and descriptions in this, a very effective poem. good stuff. |
| addie pray 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. Harsh-heroin euphoria to read. |
| swaggering curses 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abuseLovely, though very bitter. The last sentence made me smile, and how true it is, in all situations. Lovely. =) |
| pneumothorax 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseI love it. The tone reminds me of the almost over-done Spike character in Buffy (don't kill me. I'm not such a fan) with the english accent. We don't all speak like that. It works well in this though, awesomely. |
| tablesalt 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abusei love that tone. so casual, so matter-of-fact yet so hard at the same time. do come back soon. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-06-02 ch 1, | abusemy god. this was amazing. and the closest thing to perfection I think someone could get. disney did screw us all over. |
| obsidian katana 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseawesome poem. nice informal conversational narrative style of this piece. nice use of parenthesis for side comments. i like the message of this. and i simply love the ending. wonderfully written. great job! |
| Aslan Israel 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseVery creative. Love the little thing in italics at the begining, and perfect end. Brava. |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseWELCOME BACK!I like the line "I'm drunk on society" :) |
| AboveTheSalt 2005-05-30 ch 1, | abuseahh lin! Your posting makes me ever so happy. This is stunning. It's one of my favorite pieces of yours. There is nothing I don't love about this poem. Your words & parentheses/italics are perfect (as usual) and I adore the first two lines, snippets of the glamorous life you've picked up on. This sounds like two starstruck posh lovers trying to break up or break it off with reality in a way. In any event, I just love this. I believe it'll be on my favorites after I read it a few more times. Title's perfect too, by the way. Brilliant work as usual and I'm so glad to see you posted! Hopefully more will follow :) -salt. |
| philoslove 2005-05-30 ch 1, | abuseEverytime I read your works, it never fails to stun me. A darker side of fame that you show, which you mingle with society itself: splendid! The bitter tone is captured well, and one can sense the persona may be laughing bitterly at herself which made more impact on me, perhaps more personal. Stunning and brilliant work! |