   Micchansan 2005-06-05 . chapter 5Update soon! |
 MegumiReisui 2005-06-04 . chapter 50.0 Telekinesis! omg awsome story.. plz continue soon! |
 Shadow E. KAtt 2005-06-04 . chapter 5 Hey cool! I luv your charries and I like the mystery. Does Akara have powers or something? |
| Shadow E. Katt 2005-06-04 . chapter 3 Not bad and it's real mysterious. I like your style. Keep writing! |
| Shadow E. Katt 2005-06-04 . chapter 1 Oh yeah, this totally grabs the reader's attention and holds onto it throughout the whole chapter. Not bad at all. :) |
| Micchansan 2005-05-30 . chapter 4 Cute. Please update soon. |
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