THIS WAS ONE OF YOUR STORIES THAT I FIRST READ. IT WAS GREAT.IT HAD SO MUCH FEELING TO IT. IT WAS A STORY YOU COULD ACTUALLY SEE PEOPLE LIVING THE LIFE THAT BAILEY LIVED.LUCAS FOR ME SEEMED LIKE THIS KNIGHT COMING TO RESCUE THE PRINCESS THAT IS SURROUNDED BY LAVA AND THIS MAN EATING DRAGON.

WOW THIS IS A REALLY GREAT STORY.ITS NOT LIKE ALL THOSE OTHER HIGHSCHOOL STORIES AND I REALLY LIKED IT :)

This was a good story. I liked how there were some parts of Bailey that made you feel sorry for her but at the same time want to hit her for falling into that lifestyle. I was a little confused with some of the naming (it didn't quite match up), and there were a fair amount of typos, but overall, it was a very well written story.

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Oh... the ending of chapter 13... well no, all of chapter 13 was really hard to read... please tell me there will be more.
I've really enjoyed reading this story, despite my lack of reviews.

I like this story a lot, it has a depth of feeling and attention to detail that reminds me of professional writing. You should seriously consider try getting this published. Update soon please! :-)

Ohh!! What an amazing story! I'm absolutely loving it. Please update soon!

Gah

I can't believe I forgot to review this story. I loved it. Sometimes I don't like first person narration, it's just "this happened, then I said this, then this happened. OMG" but I love the way you do it and really get inside her head.

Well, I'm going to read more of your stuff. You rock. I've been saving "The Long Road" because it looked interesting, and I keep forgetting to read it, but today is the day! Woo!

Shae, amazing story. I've told you many times, but this has to be set in stone. This writing drained away into my soul and filled it with the passion that your story inspires. Great Work!And for the record.. I never cried... twice...

ok, maybe twice... but during the rest of my reading I was pure solid stoical man. *beats chest*

some words are the wrong words, i can see where you can make those mistakes. a few spelling errors. but none of that really matters until publication because the content supersedes any and all frivilous lapses in form.

once more. amazing eye opening in-depth to teenage heart and mind.

We would be here for hours if I was to write out everything I want to say about your story. It was excellent in so many unexplored ways. You've made it impossible to judge someone as a **. Excellent, simply the best yet. We need more.

wow that was such a good story. i love your ending it tied up all the loose ends.

Beautiful *Claps really hard* I loved this.

fly me to the moon, let me play among the stars, let me see what spring is like on jupiter and mars, in other words, hold my hand, in other words, baby kiss me...

i was actually listening to that song while i read this COMPLETELY AWESOME chapter! that was a great ending!

thank you.i liked your story.

*sniffs* that was beautiful, and i was asking you all kind of questions, and next thing you know, in the next chapter, my questions would be answered, lol, loved it, hope you come out with another great story

Fifteen reviews for this? Unbelievable... This is realistic, well-written and generally a great read. I love Riley: she was a little shocked about Bailey and then she was a little bitchy; but she got over it and respects Bailey's desicion. Lucas, of course, is everyone's dream come true and I hope this dream lasts for Bailey. Only you can tell me! Update ASAP!