love it, i kinda feel a sense of calm when i read it, well done, its beautiful!

i get that feeling when reading emmotional books or touching poems like it's all kind of blurring by and you feel kind of apathetic for not caring but you just can't stuggle to get it to yourself right then so the pages just role on and on or poem depending i like this it shows a touch base attitude of harsh reality mixed with the soft echo s of the mind

Great piece!

Such a great piece. I really like it.

I can relate - only reason I started reading in middle school was to keep myself sane from not having any friends. I also did, just recently, go through a dry spell - but now Dracula is blowing my mind :P. Your poem is pretty good, sorry to give you such a poor review when you gave my cruddy poem a standing ovation. I get what you are saying but not exactly why you are saying it. What is the cause for your dry spell? Just moving on? Depression? Anyways, thanks for your review :)

i can relate to this piece, i really like it, good job.

You play the guitar?! awesome! I wish I was allowed but no, it's a "waste of time and money" and I'll "forget about my piano, and years of lessons will be wasted, it's bad enough that" I "just decided to quit" three years ago. *sigh* hey at least I still play for pete's sakes... anywho.

I like this. A lot. Mostly because I can relate... I've been reading constantly since I was about five and dicovered chapter books, but I can't lose myself in the story the way I used to. It's not just one part that makes this poem great, the whole thing is just... wow. Anyway, yes I am done rambling now... I really should write something... toodles!

~Leila*

I like! Good imagery and a strong piece. Well done! QueenVixta

This is realyl brilliant. i love the beginning and ending especially. I feel this way alot.

ANNA

this was really good...i know exactly how it is...well done...amazing job on expressing urself. lots of love ~AllyCred~

im loving your stuff more and more each tiem i read them! nicely put. and wow. so relatable as well!

Awesome job!!