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Smoky Bear 2005-11-09 . chapter 1
governments and the blind faith people put in them?

are you screaming from the left, Lidless? screaming at the middle of the road sheep that get to affect our lives by believing the lies... or am i way off, look me up in my smoky bear cave (on 'ere) to discuss if ya want, cos i have other ideas about this, n i hate being left hanging, lol
Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-08-06 . chapter 1
hm this was interesting.

"It picked you apart..." wow, sounds ike media...outsiders...people breaking your morals and standards and you stand there and take it...then after your torn, you get put back together into something that looks like you but doenst feel like you.

Anywho, just me babbling.

I love a poem that makes me think about things. It makes me wonder about my own self sometimes when I stand by and let something happen that I despise. Just a thought...
True Illusion 2005-06-02 . chapter 1
M...Very nice indeed. It's been a while since I've heard something new from you. I've missed your incredible poetry.
Aslan Israel 2005-05-31 . chapter 1
Taking a stand for something so imaginary,

That line really gets me. Wonderful job on this. Just brilliant.
Clockwork Angel 2005-05-31 . chapter 1
Wow it was though provoking...It's Like the theme is about being forcefully modified by society and rebelling against it...
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