   KageNeko 2005-09-03 . chapter 1Awesome thankyou that made my night |
| unperfectwolf 2001-02-28 . chapter 1 awe... that was cute! -Chip~ |
| tj 2001-02-09 . chapter 1 not to bad mel. |
| Luna 2001-02-02 . chapter 1 excellent....keep on going like this...who knows..you might end up writing a book. :o) |
| java no Miko ^_^ 2001-01-28 . chapter 1 vvveeeeerrrryyyyy interesting! You should upload more of your wonderfull writing no da! |
| Rachel 2001-01-28 . chapter 1 Wow, That was really really really really really really really really (more would be pretentious, but true) good. I loved it. |
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