a little hard to get into.. but i loved your description of crushing life between your fingers and feeling bad for it..and so on and so was a nice read. :)-mir.

I think I liked it, I especially liked the part with the bug, I really liked that part. It made sense.

Great poem. Nice look on life, pain, pleasure, and the minuteness of everything.

Katlyn

WOW! You have no idea how amazing this is,well you might but this is just so...Honestly there are no words I could give to express how wonderfully amazing and stunning and astonishing This really is! I'm really impressed. WOW! Midnight Lynx

So true, at the end. Very emotive, great poem.