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| Miss Kaoru 2006-05-23 ch 1,  | abuseI love Shakespeare, especially Hamlet. I always gave a lot of thought to the character of Ophelia, thinking that she doesn't get the attention from the reader that I believe she deserves, and Shakespeare intended her to have. This is beautifully written, original yet true to Ophelia's character and state of mind at the time preceding her death. I enjoyed it! I can't wait to read some of your other work. |
| Slowly Sinking 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseThat's beautifully, deeply moving. The last sentence is really powerful, the only thing I'm not sure about is using 'ever did' twice in the same sentence. But still very good; very emotive. |