|Reviews for GoodBye|
| fairEtales 4/1/06 . chapter 1
Amazing job! LOVE the metaphors! BEAUtiful!
| The Fourth Fate 9/19/05 . chapter 1
Sad. Scary though too. Like you can lose control to your self. Wow...
| Princess-anna57 5/31/05 . chapter 1
Wow, how many times in my life have I written poems like this? I can't remember, there's so many. This poem is extremely powerful and I feel that it's shortness adds to it effectiveness.
| Timothy Hazelo 5/31/05 . chapter 1
Thats really sad! OMG seperating from yourself, omg, I can't imagine how that feels!