Reviews for Passionate singe - FictionPress.com

Princess-anna57 2005-09-24 ch 1,	Nice! What else can i say?
Jaymee Raine 2005-09-15 ch 1,	Very sad, very true. Beautifully honest.
W3DNESDAY 2005-06-11 ch 1,	i like it! the repetition of the 'r' sound in red, river, rain somehow makes the imagery brighter and more powerful. "singe" isn't the best word, in my humble opinion, to use. it's kinda weak compared to the spewing and hissing and crackling imagery that comes before it. "passionate singe" is almost an oxymoron because of this. i hope that makes sense..
Philosophe Rouge 2005-06-11 ch 1,	I really enjoyed your poem, and I checkd out a few of your others I really like the way you organise your thoughts and words. You avoid many of the more commonly seen Cliches, and create something original and refreshing.
Strangerwithnoface 2005-06-08 ch 1,	Heh, thank you for the fav. I love this poem, I love the rhyme to it... it sounds so... just gives you some great imagery, and gives you a sense of comfort with the words. ~Vlad
Im/the/ONE 2005-05-31 ch 1,	I loved it! I could completely understand what you were going for... It is probably one of my top favorites! Keep up the good work!
Draven DarkCrow 2005-05-31 ch 1,	I love the strong images you used in this poem...very powerful... xo