i like. very nicely done, with an interesting format. sad. the title drew me in.

The numbers "technique" (I cant' quite find the right word) wroks .

wow.

"she/he/they/we pay in stds instead of cash."

:)

Man, I wish I was this good at using messed-up grammar in my potery. I've messed around with it a few times before, but I always end up looking like I'm trying to learn English or something.

Well this formatting is amazing, and what you state with cutting sarcasm is simply WOW

Awesome. I loved it.

That's unbelievable. I hope it doesn't sound pretentious, but in a way you told a chapter of my life there (I have a thing with over identifying, it can get creepy, just let me know and i'll stop)But that is an amazing piece of writing. I feel rather insufficient now...

i love the end of point 3 and all of point 4 instead, very interesting and saddly true x weasel within x

ooh i adore this. i like the formatting. it's very original with the use of numbers and everything. all of this is fantastic and oh so quotable. excellent job and keep writing. also thanks for the review :D

"pretty pretty girl walks down the red carpet /of reality/" love that. i love the format too, and the way it ends up with the 6/9 at the end. by the way, just wanted to mention that i disagree with one of the reviewers on your poem "cut from magazines" i thought the "vulgarity" WAS appropriate for the poem. it fit, it worked, and that's all i wanted to say. )

first off, i LOVE the title. next, the line "4. she/he/they/we pay in stds instead of cash." is absolutely beautiful. and finally, the end is so realistic that i want to cry. you rock.

you are a fantastic inspiration.-jess

beautiful. really, just amazing.

!* noelle *!

oh my. tragic in a stunningly beautiful sort-of-way. nicely done.

love the numbers. love all of it. love your writing. "(barefooted & glossy eyed)" is perfect. there is nothing i can say about your work i haven't already said. it's hard to write a review after reading one of your pieces, but i'll try anyways. beautiful work.

-salt.