Reviews for Kathryn and Steve

itsonlyreality
2005-06-10
ch 1,

well... it was sappy... VERY sappy... painfully sappy... so sappy i wanted to gag myself with a spoon, but thats alright, i think its what you were going for. not a very pleasant read, but if you clean up some of the sappiness, it has the potential to become a very entertaining romance story. haha i LOATHE kathryn, i think its how its supposed to be, incredible job of making her annoying. not any melodrama that i can see, but if you want my opinion, i think you should jack up the drama but take out the "melo" bit. seriously, melo drama is a bit annoying. but it has potential, honey, and youre not a bad writer. keep with it.

thanks for reviewing, by the way, it was sweet.

crusoeing
2005-05-31
ch 1,

It's nicely written, but I don't think that's it's very melodramatic at the moment? Sappy? Yes. Beautifully sappy. Though I'm not to keen on the way it starts with a dream. I will be reading the next chapters! ... Ehm - or at least, I will if I remember.

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