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| I miss you most when I'm al... 2005-07-20 ch 1,  | abusei really really like this...it's honest and raw. i relate because i felt like this before.hopefully not a gain. very good job, and thanks for all the reviews.. |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abusei like the first verse most but all of this is very good, i like how you list eveything, it makes the reader concentrate on what you're saying x weasel within x |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseThe flow to this is nice. |
| Stassney 2005-06-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseah ... i love this one ... i am especially taken with the first stanza and the formatting of it ... just brilliant |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful, and honest. I can see where you are coming from and I'm sure many people can. You said it in a clear and almost comforting way. Keep it up. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abusethat is so sad...*Hugs* I hope that doesn't stay long. it's hard to be alone in depression..I've been there. ~Sorrow~ |
| ShadowPharoh 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abusef.a.n.t.a.s.t.i.c. fantastic. SP |
| crusoeing 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseI didn't really like this poem much. I mean, ok, it's trying to express a negative emotion and it didn't fail, as such. However, there didn't seem to be many new ideas in there. But you got your point over, I guess! |