Woot woot go u! ur poems r wew gd! ur so gona b like a profesional author wen ya older! :P

OMG! I love this poem! You must right more!

I was quite apprehensive about looking at this poem, in case it turned out to be the same as every other poem with the word 'pain' in its title, but it was actually really good. You've written it as if her lover hurt her physically, and that's a take I've never seen before. However, you do need to work on using the apostophe.

I can really relate! Very well written!