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| Ether Boy 2006-03-22 ch 1, | very powerful, it scared me a bit. although not as much as you gorwling at me. that very much scared me indeed. i'll put more stuff up the next time i feel its right + i can find something good. atm i'm in the mood for writing love songs. one of those where you can put your arms around your boyfriend/girlfriend and cuddle. yeah, also My Big Green Folder is about the american president. i though that'd be obvious with the 4th stanza. |
| Helena Evangelist 2005-12-15 ch 1, | You are amazing. This is one of the best poems I have every read. I really like the whole twist at the end and the over all feel of the poem. Love it. -Miss Helena Black I can't get over this poem!! I'm going to go read it again..lol |
| Firefly's Locket 2005-07-31 ch 1, | Lovely despair. Nearly brought me to tears. |
| Mo 2005-06-13 ch 1, | Again, snaps for this...I love how you write...it makes me feel like "Hey, its ok to be angry, Mo..." I adore the rjyme scheme dear, wherever did you get it? It's lovely, tragic and exciting (I should be a critic). Great Job! |
| Ally 2005-06-02 ch 1, | omg that was really dark but i love the twist at the end |
| Cursed-Destiny 2005-05-31 ch 1, | Awesome, truly awesome. This is really good kinda creepy, but really good |
| Slowly Sinking 2005-05-31 ch 1, | Ohh, that's creepy, but kinda cool too. Should I be thinking things like that? But, anyway, great poem. |