Reviews for What Is This Pain?

Darlingdeath 2005-06-02 ch 1,	Wow, Chris, thats amazing. The emotions are so beautifully portrayed. The emotion described in the poem is the same emotion that made me cut. I'm here to talk to if you can't talk to your g/f. I know what its like, the apathy and hatred, and the sort of unkown yet profound fear... Simply wonderful work though!
Sela-chan 2005-05-31 ch 1,	Really good description of the days we all have sometimes.
Normal=Weird 2005-05-31 ch 1,	This is a really good poem. I was wondering, were you just writing this to vent some steam, or are you going to go back and revise it? The grammar and syntax are good. Spelling could use a little work. Some lines are longer than others and have many more syllables. If you rearranged some of the words, you could add a steady meter and rhythm to your poem. Your poem has a good message and, with some revision, could be worth submitting.