good story

Aw imagine if their kit was a girl...I think it'd be cute, haha. But I love this whole Zercan series thing. It's amazing.

I love Xabi'a. He's adorable. And Cade's protectiveness is endearing. I love this!

-explodes into a pile of anxiousness confetti-

I ned to know what happens next! -cries- These series are just so amazing!


please update sooN!

I didn't realise I hadn't reviewed this story yet. Simply: I LOVE this fic! The characters are fantastic, Xabi'a is adorable/cute and Cade is hot and charming as the strong protector. *g*

The world you have created is also fasinating and very intriguing. A nice twist on the Mpreg tale so congratulations! My two favourite things have been inserted into one fabulous tale: cats and mpreg.

I hope you continue this fic whenever you are able!

god i can't get enough of these stories! plz, write more and keep up the amazing work!

this is funny!
What kind of a place is this Zerca? An S&M community? Damn it, it has to be France!

I sense a continuation coming... ack! update! ...

I about died when he put his hand out... so... what are they supposed to do for greeting?

*screams*
I would faint...

Question, I know you seem to have a disdain for women on zerca, but can they have babies any way?

Yay turean!

*collective gasp*
That biOtEch deserves a smacking!

Love your stories!
Would you be continuing to write them?

This was cute, but there are some things that keep it from being -good-.
1. Some sentences suffer from awkward sentence struckture - this problem was bigger in the main story, though.
2. Why does Cade seem to think that self-lubrication in a guy is normal? There's a reason why lube is used - shouldn't he at least be going, "okay, wow, this is weird"?
3. On that note, he's awfully quick to accept that Xabi is pregnant. It's like,
"Hai Cade I am a bloke and I am having your babies!"
"AWESOME."
Shouldn't there be a bit more WTFery on his part first? Some denial, at least?
4. The dialogue. This is mostly Xabi's problem. Even without the stuttering, it feels stiff and unnatural. Paired -with- the stuttering, it gets downright absurd. Sometimes it feels like the stuttering is put in there like an afterthought. Heavy flirting stuttering = SO NOT WIN.
5. The STUTTERING. Seriously. There are two issues here, apart from the artificial feeling it has, and they are,
A. People who stutter do NOT stutter on every single word, and they stutter the most when they're nervous or exited. It's not a constant thing.
B.Try reading it aloud. At some spots - like the "s"es at the end - it sounds like a robot speaking. Also, PEOPLE DON'T STUTTER AT THE END OF A WORD.
And that, I think, is all. Kthxbai.

I was wondering when you're going to update?