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| BlueJayWalking 2005-07-17 ch 1, | abuseWow! Haha I love the conversational flow in the narrative.. it just makes it funnier. Park benches that talk...wonderful idea - you definitely should do more of this!!:) LOL I love the mayor. |
| Accalia Aeryn 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuselol! This has to be the most interesting piece I've read in a long time. Great writing and imagination! |
| Cloud Burst 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuselol i really enjoyed this short lil piece - really interesting =) keep up the great work! |
| naiinis 2005-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseyuk dis sux! ur story is nt funi at ol! it was so0o0o0o stupid. park benches? dum idea. i did nt laf once wile readin dis. maybe nxt time u do a better job? |
| dry sherry 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseHahaha~ Wow...if this is the result of going to that Eugene Lang conference - !! I was chuckling and snickering the entire way through. Rem, YOU'RE going to be a writer! Ah, such poking fun. I loved it (especially the beginning). Save this and give it in to New Slang next year~!Yoo-jinps - got your email re: club, will email you back after I review~ ^-^ |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseOh yeah!! How was that. Did you have fun? Were they nice?!?! I liked this either way. Haha...benches that could talk. If only, if only. I talk to my walls occasionaly but they never seem to answer. ^^ Good Job. |