Sorry i'm too lazy to sign in, but this was a great poem, definately an A! I like the way you draw in so much imagery about the car...especially the black as fatality one. good job!

Oohh! Powerful! I loved it! Why didn't you tell me you could write such amazing poetry! I mean this had so many excellent descritions and metophors... you should so totally get this published or somethin! Wow, you certainly seem to know a lot about cars. Great work with this! It really is amazing and I would give it an A! Keep up the great work.

Oh and I wanted to tell you that I'm taking a break from fictionpress this summer so I probably wont update and I wont be able to review other peoples work. But I'll check back next year! Later...