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Saranacian Freak, who is too lazy to log in 2006-01-31 . chapter 1
This is really good. The only suggestion I have is to do something about the word "psychological", because it really breaks up the rhythym of the first stanza. Read it out loud and you'll see what I mean. Keep up the great work!
Michiko87 2005-07-05 . chapter 1
That last line was god! I liked this peom very much. ^_^
lyingdreamer 2005-05-31 . chapter 1
This strikes me to wonder why darkness is the designated resort. I like this piece.
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