 recreated 2005-05-31 . chapter 1awe! ((bawls))
((points at poem)) I know that feeling. It hurts. oh gosh it really hurts. awe!
I loved this part: You said you loved me,
I believed you.
God was I a fool.
Goodbye Love,
Hello Loss.
Goodbye.
That's happened to me in real life! ((more bawling)) Awe! This was so good! I loved it!
P.S. Thanks for all your reviews of my story! I adore hearing from you! And I've always got time for great poems like this!! |