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| SciFiChic2007 2005-06-23 ch 1,   | Very deep is the only word i can find to explain it it makes you think about the words |
| Confused-Mind 2005-06-14 ch 1, | Once again powerful words, great style and form, and awesome flow. I look forward to reading more of your poems. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-06-12 ch 1, | very real. very nice title as well ;) |
| this is my love for you 2005-06-07 ch 1, | Beautiful... like the world has gone numb and nothing exists except for you. |
| Anna178 2005-06-05 ch 1, | The ending is brilliant. 'welcome to my paralysis', and about convulsions feeling normal. This really packs a punch. everything is numb, and it all slips by you. ANNA |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-06-03 ch 1, | wow wow wow! the last line is amazing! i really like this, the whole style of it is really different, fresh and makes the poem even better. i like every verse as much as the rest, which makes a change as i can usually pick out a fave but not here, i like it all! very well written i say x weasel within x |
| poetic abortion 2005-06-02 ch 1, | amazing. !~* noelle *~! |
| AllyCred 2005-06-01 ch 1, | i like this...kinda felt the paralysis when reading...nice with expressing the feel of being so numb and everything crumbling...good. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |