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| Awkward Sylence 2006-01-31 ch 1,  | abuse...Well, so much for your five supportive reviews, eh? Well, no time like the present! And so I present to you... REVIEW #1! Booya. Yeah, anywho, you're going to have to remind me again who you are... In case you might've forgotten, I'm Mocha's "old" friend. But about this story... WHY HAVE YOU NOT CONTINUED?! Only that girl Myrika ever gets fifteen million reviews for writing one chapter. Heck, she could write "Once upon a time, I tripped and fell on my face." and she'd get reviews pouring in telling her how deep and profound and exciting her story is. So by all means continue writing. I liked this, however short it may be. "Black Death" made me laugh for some reason. I don't know, maybe I'm just...you know, weird. I like to MIX THINGS UP (or down below) a little. Awkward Sylence (a sham of crendi's miles) |