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| astral boy 2006-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseYou called the water ink, that was really cool. I can picture the way that water looks at night perfectly from that line. So well done, I liked it. Thanks for your comments! |
| Ellin Louise 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseSome well described imagery. |
| onyxdragonflyy 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abuseVery well brought together as if the words had sowed their own path. Enjoyed the read. Thank you. ^_^ |
| Ajna 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, beautiful piece! You deserve a standing ovation! :) The descriptions and word choices are lovely. I adore this! |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful description, I love it. Keep it up. Thanks for reviewing |
| Princess-anna57 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abuseHey! This is really good! I love the descriptions. ^_^ I'm not kidding, this is completely outstanding. You know what? This deserves a spot on my favourites list. That's how much I love it. I'm not doing this to make you happy; you have real talent at writing. Don't ever stop! Love always, Anna -xoxo- |
| simpleplan13 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abusebeautiful... thanks for your reviews... sorry about the awaviod typo |